Last night I was mysterious

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Monday
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Last night I was mysterious

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Last night I was mysterious
I poured water over my restless legs
water from my leaking boat
Today isn't any better
today is tommorrow's yesterday
but it doesn't smell like future
It is raining now
There's a wurm wedding in the Westend
Colin Dale is taking pictures as usual
he always does it
I don't discuss with him
I would say something and he would
say the opposite ending with
"and here is the proof"
I look at his photo and he is right
I never calculate my directions
nor do I trust my cryptic arguments
I should write this down on plein paper
I should mention the cunt's saliva more often
I really would if I had a context
Britney is in trouble
they are after her and she will die
she's already dead
This piece has got no structure
but a reference to the self
there's nothing bad about it
and the self doesn't care
It's bleeding time
the anal part of the year
the November downstairs trip
Some are affected by the seasons
others by their period
the rest has got nothing to eat
Last night I was mysterious
Today I am the same
alright I am a stranger
and no one is to blame
Lion of Lions
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Re: Last night I was mysterious

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an ignored but fine effort.
iveta
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Re: Last night I was mysterious

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wow that sounds like diane de prima after reading accursed poets....truly decadent
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Monday
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Re: Last night I was mysterious

Post by Monday »

was it any good,
there's a reason why you should
remember me now ?
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mat james
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Re: Last night I was mysterious

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Last night I was mysterious
Today I am the same
alright I am a stranger
and no one is to blame
8)
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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tinderella
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Re: Last night I was mysterious

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I like your haiku Monday

and your poem wasn't bad either :D
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