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Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:51 pm
by piƱata heart
forever happy
if i could kiss your shoulder
i need nothing else
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 6:43 pm
by Violet
I need nothing else
your smile's sweet eternity
in grace do we laugh
later note... okay, I'm not liking this one at all now... see why it might have been thwarted by Marisha below... but as they say, nothing risked, nothing gained...
even later note... no, I think that's nothing ventured, nothing gained... [and it's: in grace do I barf (at such a line)]...
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 7:38 pm
by Marisha
Violet wrote:I need nothing else
your smile's sweet eternity
in grace do we laugh
in Grace do we laugh
as we nervously wait
to eat our dinner
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:08 pm
by Violet
to eat our dinner
or, skipping that, I'd give you
something sweet of me
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:27 pm
by Gullivor
something sweet of me
lay your head upon my breast
it's love in the flesh
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:49 pm
by Violet
it's love in the flesh
love in its morning, in its
waking tenderness
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 9:12 pm
by Gullivor
waking tenderness
eyes awakening, souls bind
love is felt by sight
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 11:22 pm
by anneporter
love is felt by sight
lavender awakening
in the evening sun
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 11:48 pm
by lizzytysh
in the evening sun
we see a different world
more tender the light
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 1:22 am
by Marisha
lizzytysh wrote:in the evening sun
we see a different world
more tender the light
more tender the light
than are actually needed
do something else please
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 1:26 am
by anneporter
more tender the light,
pale pink the west horizon,
as porch lights brighten
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:39 am
by Gullivor
as porch lights brighten
My heart graciously expands
filled with love again
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 4:06 am
by Violet
filled with love again
this blue page as bright as spring
when loss grows sweeter
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 12:41 pm
by anneporter
when loss grows sweeter
window pane reflects the dawn
her face peering out
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:47 pm
by Gullivor
her face peering out
daydreaming of her lost love
lost but she knows love