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Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 2:19 am
by Manna
I see A. A. Milne
everywhere I chance to look
what haunting is this
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 2:31 am
by raggletagglegypsy
What haunting is this
whispering softly to me
'yes, he is the one'
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:09 am
by che
My English may not be to the good but , as you say, here goes-
yes he is the one,
and we are the two who know
of this secret thing
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 6:46 am
by damellon
Well done che!
Of this secret thing
others knew, walking along
the enchanted way
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:57 pm
by jimbo
the enchanted way
that our time has dissapeared
like the winter snows
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 10:46 pm
by William
like the winter snows
the summer rains, the autumn
falls and spring has sprung
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 10:49 pm
by Lion of Lions
jimbo wrote:the enchanted way
that our time has dissapeared
like the winter snows
like the winter snows
wow! something I didn't knows!
and summer sunny?
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 12:46 am
by lizzytysh
[I wondered when that would happen
.]
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 2:54 am
by Diane
and summer sunny?
and winter bleak and bitter?
could it be re-versed?
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 4:48 am
by raggletagglegypsy
Diane wrote:and summer sunny?
and winter bleak and bitter?
could it be re-versed?
Could it be re-versed?
fourteen lines repositioned
to make a sonnett
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 5:09 am
by lizzytysh
to make a sonnet
nature need only appear
wordless poetry
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 11:29 am
by mickey_one
lizzytysh wrote:to make a sonnet
nature need only appear
wordless poetry
wordless poetry
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 12:54 pm
by damellon
lizzytysh wrote:to make a sonnet
nature need only appear
wordless poetry
Wordless poetry
silent songs, motionless dance
are oxymorons
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 1:36 pm
by mickey_one
damellon wrote:lizzytysh wrote:to make a sonnet
nature need only appear
wordless poetry
Wordless poetry
silent songs, motionless dance
are oxymorons
No, no Dame Llon, you were meant to have followed my last line (or at least acknowledged the "subtle" joke)
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 1:37 pm
by raggletagglegypsy
damellon wrote:
Wordless poetry
silent songs, motionless dance
are oxymorons
Are oxymorons
comparatively unique
calculated risks