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Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 4:47 pm
by lizzytysh
there is only you
in this universe landscape
where will you begin
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 5:26 pm
by jimbo
there is only you
dont you know.you do exist
have you found the reason
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 6:18 pm
by Cate
Have you found the reason?
Reason? I guess is to be
that will have to do
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 7:23 pm
by jimbo
that will have to do
i cant believe in that dream
do you believe it
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 7:38 pm
by mickey_one
jimbo wrote:that will have to do
i cant believe in that dream
do you believe it
do you believe it
Jimbo's revived this dead thread
no-one reply please
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 7:46 pm
by jimbo
no one reply please
to this pathtetic dreaded thread
let it R.I.P
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 7:59 pm
by mickey_one
jimbo wrote:no one reply please
to this pathtetic dreaded thread
let it R.I.P
I'm delighted to see that your middle line has 8 sylathingys and thus does not count as a further haiku
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 12:34 am
by lazariuk
mickey_one wrote:
I'm delighted too
see that your middle line has
8 sylathingys
and thus does not count
as a further haiku so
says our mickey one
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 12:07 am
by Birdonawire
Cate wrote:Birdonawire - You didn't leave 5 syllables in your last line to play with. I'll just go back a bit.
[with] [in], [then], [with] [out]. Does that not count as five syllables? Maybe i'm wrong so can you explain.
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 1:58 am
by Cate
Birdonawire wrote:Everybody knows,-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Or should know, the sun shines first-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------within, then, without
Hi Erik
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with] [in], [then], [with] [out]. Does that not count as five syllables? Maybe i'm wrong so can you explain.
Your absolutely right, that certainly counts as 5.
Now that I have quoted your poem I can use the slider to see the words that were missing from me. The way my computer displays your haiku I was unable to see the words - or - or within, it seems like your aviator would be on top of them.
with in then with out
seems to be five syllables
at least the math works....well
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 2:03 am
by jimbo
within there without
the feeling is not fortold
have you got some faith??
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 1:33 am
by Cate
Since the game has ended I can break the rules
God came to me last night
she whispered in my ear
Why do you not come to me when you dream?
Because you are not real - I reply
How did you come to my ear? I ask
but she does not answer
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 1:52 am
by lizzytysh
VERY nice, Cate.
~ Lizzy
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 3:16 am
by Birdonawire
Have you got some faith,
Said the voices from within,
But faith is without.
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:14 am
by jimbo
but faith is without
without faith there is nothing
nothing is without