The Infinite Haiku

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come on i ow a
hilary needs you all now
cause bill let her down..........
love is not forgotten......
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Cate wrote:if it's death they fear
if trepidation controls
they seal their own fate
they seal their own fate
evasive Canadian
you club them to death


(well, I don't suppose you do personally, but after a visit to seal island in South Africa the other day, I am sympatico an' all that, the idea that they are somehow responsible for their demise, as you shockingly suggest, is shockingly shocking)
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you club them to death
C.C. with dancing and song
wearing something tight
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mickey_one wrote:(well, I don't suppose you do personally, but after a visit to seal island in South Africa the other day, I am sympatico an' all that, the idea that they are somehow responsible for their demise, as you shockingly suggest, is shockingly shocking)
Hi Michael
Looking forward to you telling us of your travels in Everything Else.
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cause bill let her down
from window to the garden
wearing something tight
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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how tight did you say
a ducks arse?or Lewinskys
what about the Bill?
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jimbo wrote:how tight did you say
a ducks arse?or Lewinskys
what about the Bill?
Hi Jimbo

I don't know if you read the intro to "The Infinite Haiku". Our silly little poem involves using the last line of the previous verse for the first of yours and following the 5-7-5 rule and also trying to have some humor. I'm not very observant of the last part and you are not observant of the first part. We both do OK with the middle part.
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with the middle part
of his life nearing its end
Jack aged gracefully
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Jack aged gracefully
with a flower in his hair
his scars turn to buds
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Manna wrote:Jack aged gracefully
with a flower in his hair
his scars turn to buds

his scars turned to buds
and his sbikes turned to the left
his sboats to the right
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his sboats to the right
tried so hard to be clever
can barely follow
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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his scars turn to buds____________his sboats to the right______can hardly follow
led to this garden by a_________a strail so long and narrow____You follow sweet and clear a
little wild bouquet
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can barely follow
the pretty little bouquet
traveling by scar
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Manna wrote:can barely follow
the pretty little bouquet
traveling by scar
traveling by Scar
borough Fair, parsley, sage, Rose
Mary and thyme, re:
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Mary and thyme, re:
member the lime, daquiris
with sun in Key West
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