The Voice (ii)

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Bernard
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The Voice (ii)

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I am a moon traveller, a lover of mercy, a stranger standing in an open doorway. I am the drowned forgotten voyager of a dark sea, the dreamer who slumbers upon a bed of stars, the crucified saviour for all who die bearing gifts, the monk who burns with the rumour of grace and the arrow of the archer that hits its hidden mark.


I am the victim of a conquered world, a hitch-hiker with a belt made of rope, a swimmer gliding through the waters of desire and discipline, a juggler of necessity, flesh and freedom, the eyes that cut like a razor, the bird that soars above the spell of the streets, the potter who turns the wheel to fashion the clay, the heart of the lover that forgives all sins, the eyes of the artist that catch the light and the voice of the poet that breaks the silence.


I am the days of labour, creation and rest, the days of choice between the blind tearing of flesh and the prayers of faith. I am the mind of the philosopher-prophet that creates substance from shadows and the hands of the sculptor that give meaning to stone.


I am no other than the hymn of the human soul, the harmony of the indwelling sphere of the heart of love. My song casts out fear and darkness and sheds the bright, soft light of hope upon the face of all who turn towards me.


I am a moon traveller, a lover of mercy, a stranger standing in an open doorway.


Bernard McVeigh :D
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Post by katrin »

Wow! Bernard, I love it, I just love it. I think it is strong, rich, and I just- love it. :D

I am a moon traveller, a lover of mercy, a stranger standing in an open doorway
I am glad we get to hear the whole piece. Beautiful words.

Thanks
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Post by lizzytysh »

Hello Bernard :D ~

You certainly put that one sentence into phenomenal context 8) . Just as Katrin, I love it, just love it, too... for all the same reasons and more, which I know is true with her, too.
I am no other than the hymn of the human soul, the harmony of the indwelling sphere of the heart of love. My song casts out fear and darkness and sheds the bright, soft light of hope upon the face of all who turn towards me.

I am a moon traveller, a lover of mercy, a stranger standing in an open doorway.
The wisdom, beauty, and love here are overflowing.

Thank you so much for sharing your words and your heart.


~ Lizzy
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Post by katrin »

Lizzy, that is exactly right, this last paragraph just captured my heart.

quote: "I am no other than the hymn of the human soul,..."


It is simply beautiful!

Love to all fo you

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Yes, it really is simply beautiful, Katrin. I wish I could write like Bernard 8) .


~ Lizzy
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Post by Boss »

Bernard,

You call out to a moonless night, call out to a summer day. And in your insistence I taste Life a little more deliciously once again. Dense yet clear, I loved every bit of it. You surely have 'the voice of the poet that breaks the silence.'

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Post by mat james »

Bernard,
Brother,,

I hug your heart and I kiss your soul.

xxx Mat.
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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Post by Bernard »

Greetings Katrin, Lizzy, Adam and Mat,

A big thank you to you all for your responses to The Voice (ii). I have not had access to the internet for a while so please forgive my late reply.

A big, warm, albeit belated, welcome to the forum, Katrin. The Voice (ii) was written in the small hours of the morning whilst I was on night shift. Hence, the references to "moon traveller" and "bed of stars". I worked night shift for nearly seven years. And many of my poems around that time came "of a sudden" whilst my family were at home tucked up sleeping. The poems at this time came to me at great speed. Often I had to scrawl shorthand just to keep up with the intuitive flow. All references in The Voice (ii) are specific and concrete to my life experience. Either they related to myself or people I knew. The lines with "the bright, soft light of hope" came to me in meditation some time ago. It was a life transforming vision. Needless to say that vision works its way into a great deal of my poems and their themes. Indeed, that vision now permeates my whole life. Looking forward to hearing from you soon :D .


Lizzy, I can only dream of emulating your phenomenal writing output. 12,411 posts in four years. That's unbelievable creativity and stamina! It's simply amazing! What you bring to me, and no doubt others, on the LC forum cannot be captured in words alone but only felt by the heartbeat of the soul. The depth and honesty of your responses and intuitive intelligence is a revelatory delight. Our world is a better place for your presence Lizzytysh. Shine on sister of light :D .


Adam, you surely have "the voice of the poet that breaks the silence." As Lizzy has intimated before, your words strike like a heavyweight boxing champion in his prime. Your work has power and punch. The above line in The Voice (ii) refers to all poets, past and present, of our world and the courage they display in their acts of revelation. Keep on writing champ 8) .


Brother Mat, may you continue to dwell in your house of spaciousness, timelessness and causelessness. I remember a friend saying to me once that in the face of the numinous, one can remain silent or one can compose a thousand thousand psalms. May you do both 8) .


Love to you all

Bernard
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Post by Jimmy O'Connell »

This is good... very good...
Oh bless the continuous stutter
of the word being made into flesh
-The Window-
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Post by lizzytysh »

Dear Bernard, Judith, Katrin, Adam, Mat, Vilmos, and Jimmy ~

You found me in the quiet places where I needed to be found.

I deeply appreciate your words... more than you know and more than I can say.

Thank you very much.


Love,
Lizzy


Dear Bernard ~ The content of your postings more than makes up for the number of mine. We're at least even 8) .

Thank you for your profound generosity and kindness of your words to me, Bernard. I am deeply moved and very appreciative.

Those are very interesting stories behind this poem and many of your others. It clearly was a very inspiring time for you on that job... the night more than made up for the night shift. I've never had a vision such as yours, yet I still need to return to meditation for other reasons.

I love your analogy regarding Adam 8) and your words to Mat 8) .


Love,
Lizzy
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