The Infinite Haiku

[lizzytysh]

there is only you
in this universe landscape
where will you begin

[jimbo]

there is only you
dont you know.you do exist
have you found the reason

[Cate]

Have you found the reason?
Reason? I guess is to be
that will have to do

[jimbo]

that will have to do
i cant believe in that dream
do you believe it

[mickey_one]

that will have to do
i cant believe in that dream
do you believe it

do you believe it
Jimbo's revived this dead thread
no-one reply please

[jimbo]

no one reply please
to this pathtetic dreaded thread
let it R.I.P

[mickey_one]

no one reply please
to this pathtetic dreaded thread
let it R.I.P

I'm delighted to see that your middle line has 8 sylathingys and thus does not count as a further haiku

[lazariuk]

I'm delighted too
see that your middle line has
8 sylathingys

and thus does not count
as a further haiku so
says our mickey one

[Birdonawire]

Birdonawire - You didn't leave 5 syllables in your last line to play with. I'll just go back a bit.

[with] [in], [then], [with] [out]. Does that not count as five syllables? Maybe i'm wrong so can you explain.

[Cate]

Everybody knows,-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Or should know, the sun shines first-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------within, then, without

Hi Erik

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with] [in], [then], [with] [out]. Does that not count as five syllables? Maybe i'm wrong so can you explain.

Your absolutely right, that certainly counts as 5.

Now that I have quoted your poem I can use the slider to see the words that were missing from me. The way my computer displays your haiku I was unable to see the words - or - or within, it seems like your aviator would be on top of them.

with in then with out
seems to be five syllables
at least the math works....well

[jimbo]

within there without
the feeling is not fortold
have you got some faith??

[Cate]

Since the game has ended I can break the rules

God came to me last night
she whispered in my ear
Why do you not come to me when you dream?
Because you are not real - I reply

How did you come to my ear? I ask
but she does not answer

[lizzytysh]

VERY nice, Cate.


~ Lizzy

[Birdonawire]

Have you got some faith,
Said the voices from within,
But faith is without.

[jimbo]

but faith is without
without faith there is nothing
nothing is without