The Infinite Haiku

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by Mr Kipling
many tales were told about
jungle life, Gestalt!
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ok, key to this inanity

Kate Moss= supermodel ex. of Babyshambles lead singer, Pete Doherty, who has a well-documented and prosecuted cocaine habit. "Mr. Kipling makes exceedingly good cakes" is an advert punchline for fattening lovely sick icing thingys. Rudyard Kipling went on about the Jungle, so there's the gestalt, as I am doing the same.

oh, and pud means pudding
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mickey_one wrote:by Mr Kipling
many tales were told about
jungle life, Gestalt!
jungle life, Gestalt!
Michael you've stopped eating meat?
you might need protein?



Just kidding - interesting chain
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Cate wrote:
mickey_one wrote:by Mr Kipling
many tales were told about
jungle life, Gestalt!
jungle life, Gestalt!
Michael you've stopped eating meat?
you might need protein?

you might need pro-teen
so said the pedophile pimp
to the old punter
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to the old punter
his money is not in hand
some other has it
love is not forgotten......
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some other has it
she keeps it in a shoe box
under lock and key
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under lock and key
the secrets of destinies
hidden forever
love is not forgotten......
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jimbo wrote:under lock and key
the secrets of destinies
hidden forever

hidden forever
this worn-out thread should now be
good-bye good- bye...good
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good-bye good-bye good
bye to those who are fed up
with this worn out thread
Most of the people who want to live forever don't know what to do
with themselves on a wet sunday afternoon ...........
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ME NEVER

let the blue tide rise
and the rose will bloom again
everyone knows
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I did say the main theme was humour in this thread Jimbo so
Don,t believe me when I say goooooooodbye
I just thought it fit the previous haiku as a reply
anyway you broke the rules again , poetic licence won,t
get you out of this one , good as your haiku was .
Most of the people who want to live forever don't know what to do
with themselves on a wet sunday afternoon ...........
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Everybody knows,-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Or should know, the sun shines first-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------within, then, without
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Birdonawire - You didn't leave 5 syllables in your last line to play with. I'll just go back a bit.

shines first then without
emptiness, new star is born
but what was before?
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but what was before?
before was before, and now
there is only you.
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.

from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
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